advert: sparrow response

We were asked to present our advertisement as the others act as judges towards our presentation, these are the responses that we've received:

Most of the comments that were written down by the audiences are mostly about the blog, which is completely understandable as we didn't exactly have enough time as well as some technical errors while creating the screenshots for the progress. While I was creating the advertisement, I was having some difficulties, one of the difficulties being unable to grant access to my own devices due to my computer being broken since the start of the course. Having to work in the library has their own restrictions too as it does limit down the amount of work you're able to do on the computer itself.

As what Zoya and Carrie had commented as feedback were really detailed and specific on the things that we should be aware of for our product, which they are able to further help us on reflecting on our advertisement afterwards. As I had mentioned above, most of the comments are regarding the lack of progress towards the advertisement that we had worked on.

To be honest, there are a lot of alternatives that can be done to make the advertisement better, for example: a different design, a more straightforward advertisement and much more. Advertisements are all about creativity, the more creativity contributed, the more interesting it gets. In the very end, it is really up to what the designer is able to create, after all, the only limitation is our imagination.